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Punctuation! Capital letters!
- “If someone tells you something, that is not very nice.”
Isn’t it?
It’s a poem, my friend. Rules don’t apply, and if that’s how you want to interpret it, go ahead.
Ladies and gentlemen
Take my advice
Take of your pants
And slide on the ice-Dr. Sidney Freedman
Your “sentence” is grammatically correct, but makes very little sense (without context) and is 100% detached from the poem.
Reverend and lyricist.